I love that last line! :)
The question is, is the sun an ambiguity that provides a way of escaping a difficulty without resorting to minor civil unrest and mayhem, or is it a small slit in a wall, especially one through which small arms may be fired to incite them?new small acts of mayhem
Indeed, ambiguities everywhere.I feel for people with small arms, though.
You feel for people with small arms? Why, can't they do it for themselves?I really like it - until it kind of loses its preceding rhythm in the final couplet, which is a really good couplet, but feels out of sync with what went before, metrically.Sorry to nitpick.
aye stoosh, how about nature is nudging them along/to new acts of msyhem?
What about it? I was merely expressing an opinion, not negatively criticising your piece of work.
I was responding to your positive suggestion you daft bastard.
I really like the last line, it does sum up spring pretty well
Oh aye, never noticed the change. My apologies, you recondite old recluse you.
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