tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16639447.post2850607309874730635..comments2023-10-31T12:54:15.727+00:00Comments on Dark Mutterings from Drumsleet: Peach SkyHugh McMillanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05353561780315527799noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16639447.post-26721069573029796702009-04-01T16:55:00.000+01:002009-04-01T16:55:00.000+01:00Oh aye, never noticed the change. My apologies, yo...Oh aye, never noticed the change. My apologies, you recondite old recluse you.Stooshiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12032638065353419707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16639447.post-82253875578343198942009-03-30T10:14:00.000+01:002009-03-30T10:14:00.000+01:00I really like the last line, it does sum up spring...I really like the last line, it does sum up spring pretty wellCrafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16639447.post-60850354525605809842009-03-29T20:29:00.000+01:002009-03-29T20:29:00.000+01:00I was responding to your positive suggestion you d...I was responding to your positive suggestion you daft bastard.Hugh McMillanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05353561780315527799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16639447.post-49588597342696828132009-03-29T17:20:00.000+01:002009-03-29T17:20:00.000+01:00What about it? I was merely expressing an opinion,...What about it? I was merely expressing an opinion, not negatively criticising your piece of work.Stooshiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12032638065353419707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16639447.post-66006787582446706762009-03-27T19:17:00.000+00:002009-03-27T19:17:00.000+00:00aye stoosh, how about nature is nudging them along...aye stoosh, how about nature is nudging them along/to new acts of msyhem?Hugh McMillanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05353561780315527799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16639447.post-89600673658189035692009-03-27T18:19:00.000+00:002009-03-27T18:19:00.000+00:00You feel for people with small arms? Why, can't th...You feel for people with small arms? Why, can't they do it for themselves?<BR/><BR/>I really like it - until it kind of loses its preceding rhythm in the final couplet, which is a really good couplet, but feels out of sync with what went before, metrically.<BR/><BR/>Sorry to nitpick.Stooshiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12032638065353419707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16639447.post-47140429296057120812009-03-27T08:52:00.000+00:002009-03-27T08:52:00.000+00:00Indeed, ambiguities everywhere.I feel for people w...Indeed, ambiguities everywhere.<BR/><BR/>I feel for people with small arms, though.Hugh McMillanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05353561780315527799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16639447.post-70839355369458899552009-03-26T23:24:00.000+00:002009-03-26T23:24:00.000+00:00The question is, is the sun an ambiguity that prov...The question is, is the sun an ambiguity that provides a way of escaping a difficulty without resorting to minor civil unrest and mayhem, or is it a small slit in a wall, especially one through which small arms may be fired to incite them?<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>new small acts of mayhemSheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11908332538776254864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16639447.post-36174929852139987102009-03-25T22:10:00.000+00:002009-03-25T22:10:00.000+00:00I love that last line! :)I love that last line! :)hopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03306622656461205674noreply@blogger.com